Well, Monday is pretty much over. There was very little competition here, so I'll post up the cast and we can get down to it. We got the bare minimum for running this, so if anyone drops, I'm afraid the game may flounder. At the bottom of this post I have information for any newcomers, or those who didn't make it in, to try and be part of the group. Unfortunately, for what I have planned, we can't do this with less than four.
Luckily, we have four (almost) acceptable characters.Tarkus
- Plan B
We're missing any kind of backstory, which is understandable, since there is a lot that you (especially you) have to do with the story and it's hare to write for that. See about writing up a personality description though, so we at least know what kind of knight he is.Kroonin
We've already gone over this. You're good.The Magus
You still need to remove the equipment from the robes, you're getting a discount twice there. If you want to buy it as equipment, then you need to put it as a normal advantage. If you want it to be part of the robes, it is essentially part of the magic and needs to be bought as a Device. I understand what you want to do with it, but as the robes are just a storage space, they need to be bought in a way where you're not getting the Equipment and Removable discounts at the same time. I'm also still worried about your survivability, a +3 Toughness in a game this low level is almost a certain 2nd or 3rd degree failure half the time or more (the weakest villain I have has a +3 Damage). You will be attacked, don't think Tarkus's meat shield will save you from that every time.Galowyn Rend
Can you put some cost numbers in your powers section so I don't have to add everything? Would really help. The only big problem I can see is in your backstory. It's been beaten nearly to death in this thread, but every character must be born in the village. Please read the opening post on pg. 1 for more details on how an elf is born in this particular human village.
Going to give everyone until tomorrow night or so to make the above corrections before I start in on the game.
For those who didn't make it, we're still short a few classes (look at the original post to see what we're missing and how you can fill the spots). The cast above is all that is necessary though, so if you create a character it doesn't automatically guarantee you a spot. You still have to have your character up to snuff, as it were.