by Lord Fell » Fri Oct 05, 2012 2:44 pm
hmm.
I'm having a different problem with the game, that's unrelated to pacing. It's something that I've been thinking for a while, and it seems every time we move a bit forward in the game, instead of being alleviated my sense of there being a problem increases.
It's entirely plot related, so that's a problem. I can't really express a problem with a plot that I don't see the behind the scenes for. You may have everything all sorted out, squared away, and preplanned.. and perhaps my concern is something you can consider and discard. But... here's where I see it from a player side of the equation.
First, we have an issue with Sinister Six, and we start investigating the theft of the Philosopher's Engine.
Suddenly, King Shark seems to be a thing...?
Given our investigation into shipping, it does make sense to encounter Blackhawk. That character, as an Easter Egg was a nice touch... assuming she's an Easter Egg, and not an ongoing distraction.
Then there's this Dr. Mureau angle, which seems to be a thing.
And suddenly, the German team is fighting for their life against Madame Rouge.
Oh look, here comes Deathstroke the Ravager.
...what were we doing again? Actually, it feels to me like my list is missing something.
What I'm saying is, the plot feels like it's getting sidelined by a lot of extraneous stuff. The question I would like you to think on... is all of this appropriate to your plot? Are the additional personalities you're bringing into the thick of things useful to your overall story, or are they mostly there because you have a cool idea of how they would fit into your world? I feel like the game isn't really benefiting from these new angles and twists, when the pace is already so slow. It was presented to us that our enemies were going to be the Sinister Six. Going on 15 pages, we haven't even managed to get into the same Country as they are as of yet.
As I said, I don't know what you've got planned, and everything might be going according to that plan, in which case don't worry about any of this.